Work in Process - Audience Feedback towards Music Magazines

Part way during the process of designing my music magazine front cover, contents page and double page spread I proceeded to get audience feedback from my peers, family members and friend to try and improve my design for them. I have annotated my draft designs to show what people have said, with the positive comments highlighted in green and the negative comments highlighted in red

From this task I have learnt how I can now improve my designs. 

I plan to:

• Add more information to the Front Cover, more stories.
• Make the main story take up less space on the contents page so it doesn't neglect the other stories
• Get a more fitting photo for the contents page
• Change the colours on the Double Page Spread background
• Change the colour of writing and boxes to make it easier to read
• Divide up the boxes differently
• Add a group photo of the band to the double page spread
• Try and make it look More professional